Form / Forme

Publié le par miss link

Today's exercise is about form. What form will my writing take. So I'll try a few things...

She smiles
Shiny diamonds
Sharp
Like crocodile teeth
Makes me cringe
Too bright
Too sharp
I need softness



When she opened her mouth, I blinked unvoluntarily. Her teeth were so white they were blinding. It felt like an ad for a tooth whitener gone wrong. As she spoke, and smiled, I found myself shying away from her, as if she was some predator looking for her prey. Her eyes were cold, calculating. She was seducing, but toxic. I left the room, took a deep breath, and smiled; I had managed to escape.



Elle me regarde
Je sens déjà
Qu'elle va poser un problème
Des problèmes
Déranger le groupe
Suivre le propre fil de sa pensée
Elle vient écouter
Mais ne peut pas écouter
Elle vient apprendre
Mais ne peut pas apprendre
Elle est trop sûre
Elle sait déjà tout
Elle a oublié
La qualité essentielle
De l'étudiant
Du maître
De l'être humain
L'humilité

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